Hye everyone.
This is my second video for presentation. I hope it can improve me how to talk through this kind of activity.
Topic:
Decision making is a crucial task in ensuring the development and well-being of a company. What are the considerations that people need to make in order to come out with a good decision?
https://youtu.be/SApcfK2jr0E
MY REFLECTIONS
For this video, I want to reflect on the importance of using English as well as confident in his speech. Based on the comments given on the video, many provide a way of how to make it easier for me to speak. In addition, this has indirectly given me the knowledge of new words. However, I think that the information you want to convey does not meet the requirements of the question. I feel quite strange about this presentation. To overcome this problem, I should better understand the needs of the questions and to find the right information and appropriate information.
For this video, I want to reflect on the importance of using English as well as confident in his speech. Based on the comments given on the video, many provide a way of how to make it easier for me to speak. In addition, this has indirectly given me the knowledge of new words. However, I think that the information you want to convey does not meet the requirements of the question. I feel quite strange about this presentation. To overcome this problem, I should better understand the needs of the questions and to find the right information and appropriate information.
ReplyDeleteHye hanis. I would like to comment about your second presentation video. I cannot deny you are very good in expressing your points and your elaborations are easy to understand. You are quite open to express yourself in certain way and I really enjoy your presentation. However, I notice that at the beginning of the video, your voice is not clear. Maybe due to some technical problems. So I did not get some of your points in the beginning. But, it starts to be ok after a few minutes and I can hear your voice clearly. So, you can actually try to speak louder in the next presentation as your voice are quite soft. That's all from me. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations hanis for the effort you have shown, your way of delivery is consistent. You can draw the reader's attention with the comfort and tranquility that you show. In addition, the confidence in your presentation is clearly visible when you speak. However, you are advised to consider the verses in English and have to speak fluently. This can be overcome frequently by reading novels and viewing spoken and subtitled videos in english. I am looking forward for your next video.
ReplyDeleteHi Hanis!!!
ReplyDeleteGood in your presentation.
Your confidence level are very good.
You talk and see your audience.
It is nicely.
You have a problem in the first.
It have a stuck, okay and stuck again.
So, your voice no clearly. Maybe technical problem.
You should improve in you vocabulary for more powerful and you can useable sentences.
You can improve by sing many English song.
My dear Hanis,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your second video presentation! You have certainly improved a lot. You explain using your own words, you have good body language and eye contact and your tone, intonation as well as rhythm are more variety. This makes your presentation more interesting and engaging!
Its just that the pronunciation and enunciation of the words are not really clear this time. Perhaps, its due to the quality of the video itself.
But in all, good job! You have so much potentials in you. Cannot wait to see your third video presentation my dear :)