This last video I did with sponstan. I just memorize the keywords only. The possibilities of the video I repeat the type of the word. I hope that with all this video I can add to my confidence in future presentations.
QUESTION
How important for a company to have a stable financial situation? What are the measures or steps that can be taken to secure a strong financial standing for a company? Explain in detail.
Hye Hanis. I would like to comment on your video presentation. I can see clearly the improvement that you make since the first video to the fourth video. I can say that you really put an effort in all of your videos. You really take into account all of the comment that I gave before and I really appreciate it. You are doing a great job and I like your confidence. To improve, I think maybe you should try to read more English books to expand your vocabulary. That's all from me. I wish you all the best and good luck in your future presentation.
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ReplyDeleteWell done on your fourth video presentation! I like that you have improved when you elaborate on your points spontaneously while depending minimally on the notes. I can see you are more fluent and you are able to elaborate quite extensively as compared to before. You also look more comfortable and confident while doing so. Well done, my dear!
In order to be a fluent and proficient presenter, adequate if not extensive knowledge on vocabulary is really important. I know you have been doing this but please continue exposing yourself to more input in English both written and oral. These are the fun ways of expanding your range of vocabulary and improving your pronunciation as you can watch your favourite movies or sitcoms in English, listen to songs in English and read novels/magazines too.
Besides, keep on practicing more and if you have any uncertainties regarding the grammatical aspects in English you can always refer to revision books or just google from some reliable resources online.
These changes of habit will help you in a long run to develop your proficiency especially when delivering a presentation.
In all, you have done a good job Hanis! I can see the improvements that you have made from the first video until now. I am so proud of you!
All the best!
Hi !! Hanis. I can see that you are improving your language. I love your confidence and how you
ReplyDeleteconvey it. You communicate information spontaneously. I can see you practicing more than ever
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To improve your language, I think you should try to read more English books / novels to adding your vocabulary.Good job!
Hello my dear, you look cute and elegant as well. For me, you always said that you can't delivered it well but i can see your hard work in presenting the video. I like you spontaneous but in my suggestion you also need information and get more word in article or magazine. Because it can make your video more smooth. You need to read more book and novels to increased your word and you need to hear more video in english to make sure your fluent is clear. That all from me baby. I wish for good luck in your exam . Thanks
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ReplyDeleteThis last video I did with sponstan. I just memorize the keywords only. The possibilities of the video I repeat the type of the word. I hope that with all this video I can add to my confidence in future presentations.