Assalamualaikum and have nice day everyone.
This is the third video. This video is also an assignment to prepare myself for presentations on partners and company. Have a look at my video and leave a comment. Thanks.
https://youtu.be/_yGM-FFguPM
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This presentation gave me a lot of confidence in dealing with the audience. This is because I was able to prepare myself to speak to audiences without having to memorize. What I need to do is remember the keywords and describe them clearly and accurately in order to attract viewers to listen. However, I also need to repair the body's intonation and style to keep up with what's being said. That's all from me. Pray for me and my friends can present a good and smooth presentation. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteThis presentation gave me a lot of confidence in dealing with the audience. This is because I was able to prepare myself to speak to audiences without having to memorize. What I need to do is remember the keywords and describe them clearly and accurately in order to attract viewers to listen. However, I also need to repair the body's intonation and style to keep up with what's being said. That's all from me. Pray for me and my friends can present a good and smooth presentation. Thank you.
Dear Hanis,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your third video presentation! I can see that you have improved from your previous video. You look more confident and relax, your body language is appropriate and you explain your points using your own words and do not depend on the notes so much. Your voice and pronunciation are also clearer. :)
In all, good job and keep on practicing to achieve a better fluency when delivering your presentation. In the next video, perhaps you can consider adopting a more variety tone, intonation and rhythm so your presentation sounds more interesting and it will also help the audience to become more engaged in your presentation.
In all, very good job my dear. Keep on practicing and improving yourself ya. I look forward to watch your next video presentation :)
hai my cutey,
ReplyDeleteOkayh...although you delivered the video in noisy place and have limited time. you still remain calm and being good in presenting the point. I also impressed that you have your own word even though you said that you are very weak in english. Your pronounce and your voice very clear and sweet. : )
Keep more practicing and finish your assesments my baby XD... You have cute face to attract the people but you still have to add more tone and intonation while present the video...It will show that you are very good speaker when you delivering your point. That all from me. Thank you.
Hye Hanis. I would like to comment on your presentation video. I like your presentation where the information is very interesting. Your voice is clear and your confidence level does improve much. However, maybe you should try to speak louder to clarify your words. Other than that, you are very good at presenting. Good luck to you.
ReplyDeleteHanis, you deliver your information clear and understandable. Your confidence are very nice. You use your nw word I like it. You must pronounce louder to your word. Keep practice your presentation. Good job!!
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